Meter of the couplets
Meter
All
good verses are written from the point of view of narration. A text could be
read with uneven syntaxes but poetry is something that must have regular
syntaxes.
Humse
aaya na gaya (Galib)
Tumse
bulaya na gaya
The
list of word used are Tumse, humse, bulaya, aaya, gaya. This is simplest example of how a simplistic
approach could still create an attention. But short meter will need not a
couple but a quadruplet to make it deliver the content.
Fasla
pyar mein
Dono
so mitaya na gaya
Another
example
Taqat-e-insaan
ko zid
Gurur
bahot hai
Sunte
hai apnihi
Ashyar
bahot hai
Shorter
the meter lesser the dramatics & longer the meter the scope for dramatics
becomes exponential.
Meer ke dino majhab ko aab puchte kya ho
inne to
Kashka khencha dair mein baitha kabka tarq
islam kiya
Or
Roz peshani-e-hayat-e-bal durust karun;
apni taqdeer sawaroo,
Yeh kainat ashiqee hai teri to muzhe
tasavvur ki zaroorat kya hai
Or
Insa gar
mukhlisi insa bane rahe to insaniyat ki alag zarrorat kya hai
Sang-e-marmar
aur kam aayenge numaish-e-but ki zarrorat kya hai
Self-pity
Haq zidka cheenati hai badguman-e-aatish
Ankhen jalti hai kuch aisi ke tasavvur na bane
Or
Idhar taqdeer sir pe
hai zid udhar wo muskura rahe hai
Khaudaya aap bhi kaise
kaise ghazab dha rahe hai
Or
Ek asasa khalk reh
jata hai unki aadat-e-guftaar-e-haya mein
Wasl ki raat guzare arram se zid subah gunah samjhe
aate hai
Or
Na
socha na samajha na sikha na jana
mujhe aa gaya khudbakhud dil lagana (Meer)
mujhe aa gaya khudbakhud dil lagana (Meer)
Or
Sher
ke parde mein main ne gham sunaya hai bahut
marsiye ne dil ko mere bhi rulaya hai bahut (Meer)
marsiye ne dil ko mere bhi rulaya hai bahut (Meer)
Or
Zid kya kya dekh rahi hai teri ankhein koi
pur-asar sher nahin milta
Awaaze cheekh rahi hai raston mein, par koi
dilkashi-e-saaz nahin milta
Or
Yaksu dil hi dilmein
soch raha hai zid kabse
Ke gar mera koi mukam
hota to wo kaise hota
Bayan-e-fana
Ek riwayat hai zid jo
farden farden tameel hoti hai
Aate farte-shauk wapas
namurad ban kar jata hai
Or
Jo bijli hamakti ha
unke mehal par
Wo karle tasalli mera
ghar jala kar
Or
Khoob roshan hai zid afatab jinhe jeena
pasand hai
khub kiye hai intezaar jinhe marna pasand
hai
Or
Jano-imaan fana zid
jab bhi hoti hai
Admi ko rage gairat ki
kaha hoti hai
Or
Duniya
ne kis ka rah-e-fana mein diya hai sath
tum bhi chale chalo yun hi jab tak chali chale (Zouk)
tum bhi chale chalo yun hi jab tak chali chale (Zouk)
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